literacy contract

 

how i would make the triathlon better

 

writing

 Max asked his grandma if he could mow her lawns,but it didn't end up so well.Max had just pulled out the lawn mower until he saw this quad bike sitting in the corner,he turned it on to hear the roar of the engine.He couldn't help himself he just had to ride it,he jumped on and rid it out to the field.Max's motorbike jumped into mud and mumbled quietly.Slowly and sadly max slouched down like a slug.his motorbike got stuck and his grandma came rushing out fuming as she saw the quad stuck in the mud.she pulled it out to show max how it was really done,she went speeding down the slope and hit a fatty jump and did a massive Back flip onto the grass.Max was really surprised that his grandma was a professional quad bike rider.After she had finished showing off they went in side for some cookies.

all about me

 

hi my name is jay and im 12 years old,i'm a year 8 at gisint,i like mountain biking,sleeping,playing xbox and eating.