my nice list writing 

Today we were writing about Santa's nice list.
this is my writing 

Dear Santa

I deserve to be on santa’s nice because I help my friends secondly, I am kind to my friends, thirdly I help around the house.

Firstly I deserve to be on the nice list because I help my friends.  At morning tea,Talmage,Rilen, Riley and I were playing soccer and Riley got a free kick because Talmage accidently tripped Riley over and he got a free   a kick. so Talmage tried to block the ball but moved at the wrong time and got hit by the ball in the gut and he couldn't breathe. so I took him to the office so he could sit down for a while until he felt better.

Secondly I am kind to my friends   

Rilen asked if he could play soccer at morning tea and I said yes so we ran off after the ball kicking it around.

Thirdly I help around the house

I cleaned my room without being asked on the weekend when I was with my dad.while my mum was with my sister at warehouse getting clothes.when they walked in the house and saw my room, my mum just said wow.

Yeah,but...when my mum told me to get off my xbox  I didn’t listen and stayed on for another hour playing Fortnite and my mum walked in and said i wasn’t allowed on for 3 days,it was the most miserable 3 days of my life!

So santa please put me on your nice list i’m begging you. I helped my mum clean the kitchen,I cleaned my room without being asked,I let Rilen play soccer at morning tea,I helped my nana put out the recycling.