Thursday 27 June 2019

Journal writing

This is my journal writing in a pets perspective,It was really fun because we got to write what we thought about our owners.
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  1. Anonymous3 July 2019 at 09:40

    Hi there, my name is Rio and I am a student in room 12 at mangapapa School. I really like that you were still the animal in the store when you were writing at the bottom of your store. The store made me think of my guinea pigs. Have you thought about writing more at the bottom of the store. If you would like to see my learning this is the ling,https://rioslearning.blogspot.com/

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  2. Anonymous2 August 2019 at 11:16

    Hai! I'm Jemma from your buddy school! (A.K.A Paroa school) And omg!!! this is amazing. I love the fact you call one of your owners the "horrible human" so funny! One of the things i would recommend is if you could make the writing a bit bigger? I had a bit of trouble reading it. Otherwise this is amazing! also could you tell me why you chose a cat? despite they are the cutest thing on earth. Anyway remeber to checkout my blog! https://paroagreyjemmar.blogspot.com/

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    1. Anonymous23 August 2019 at 12:02

      Thank you,I chose a cat because I have a cat and It hates me so much and really he's really fussy
      Jay

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